What Happened At Fia Fia
The food tasted so good there was candy floss,drinks and other yum stuff .My favorite food was the candy floss My favorite drink was all of them because they all tasted the same nearly .
I liked it when the big beats were playing it was awesome my body felt like there was a drum inside my chest .When there was small sound I felt really relaxed and not so wide awake or excited .
I smelt all of the yummy food and drinks they smelt so yum that I would like to eat them all and drink them .The most yummy smell was the candy floss it smelt like so much sugar and when you smell sugar it just smells so good .
The softest thing was candy floss that's what I thought it was .the hardest thing was the big sticks when I went up to do my Asian dance on the stage at the fia fia it was cool there was hauhake on the ground it did not feel that nice .
When I was sitting down on the ground I saw all of the amazing groups going on the stage and celebrating there Coulter and someone else's Coulter .that you might be good at .
Go in Bailee and take the first sentence out of every paragraph. We can read what you are writing about and don't need you putting in What it looks like?...... Check your spelling of the word culture, and edit it.
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