My weekend
Hi my name is Bailee and I am telling you what I think happened.
I wish I could go there one day and see all the sea animals and mammals. I have been there once before and it was great.
But did you know that mammals are just like us but animals aren't because animals lay eggs and mammals do not lay eggs that is so weird. If I went there I would’of seen sharks, sting rays, seahorses, penguins, slimy eels and all kinds of stuff I don't know because I haven't been there before. I think people saw little penguins at Kelly Toltins and maybe big hammerhead sharks to.
Keep striving Bailee, you are working hard to put in Capitals and full stops.
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