When i was in my tent i heard teaches talking at night time i couldn't even go to sleep.
The ground was hard and it was too noisy, so i ate some lollies and a little toast it was yum. In the morning it was dripping on the wall. On the next night tame got told off by a man.
Did you sleep in a tent like that Bailee? I like that you have used some of the words we came up with and that you have added detail to your second sentence.
ReplyDeleteNext time can you please make sure you use capital letters in the right places like I, names and titles.