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Thursday 2 July 2015

The Detective And The Dog Snatcher Pre-Writing

The Detective  And The Dog Snatcher


One night the detective woke up and saw this guy parked up beside his friends home. Then he hopped out of his van with this cleaning stuff I thought he was going to clean up their house but when he came back out he had Fred's dog called Bob.


Then Fred ran out of his house and said to the detective have you seen bob. Yes said the Detective I saw a man put him in his van.Then the detective saw the same person again and said come here and he went back into his van and drove away so the detective drove after him and found his hideout.

“Of course the Chinese shop”said the Detective so he went in and the man at the counter said “hello you want some dog cat or fish” and the Detective said “put your hands up” and the Detective pulls his taser gun out and says show me the back. And he saw all of the owners dogs and even Bob. So then the Detective takes them to jail And that was It.

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