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Walt:I am learning to write a compound sentences to make my writing more interesting.

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A compound sentence is two simple sentences joined together with a conjunction.Fanboys

How I Get To School

How I get to school

Hi my name is Bailee i'm 11 years old.I live at panorama RD I have 14 or more cousins  I have heaps of aunts uncles grandmas grandpas and Nan its cool. I have cereal in the morning when I get up from my bed then I make lunch.

My mum drops me off to school and my sister sometimes my dad drops me off I get to school at 8:30 because I have to my mum says that or earlier.


After school me my sister and my cousin josh we all walk to my aunt's. when we get there my mum picks us up over there.

Learning And Helping With My Senteces

In my writing I have been doing learning games on the site and other learning stuff on the class site. I have been doing games that have been improving my sentences. Like this one down below.

Empathy

What Does Empathy Mean To Me.

1.The identification with or vicarious experiencing of the feelings, thoughts, etc., of another

2.Identification with and understanding of another's situation, feelings, and motives.

3.The power of entering into another’s personality and imaginatively experiencing his feelings.

Do you think you have empathy?yes

why?Because I tote my sister how to ride a bike.

I think empathy is about caring encouraging and

helping.

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Bailee and Hiwarau camp writing.

Adding Detail To Sentences

A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

You can add to the

beginning

middle

end

of simple sentences.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

At Kawau Island for our activity Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen who is trained in safety and first aid was our coach on the large wooden, and very challenging confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course which is a ropes and wood set of activities at Camp Bentzon.

I was nervous about sailing on camp.

At Camp Bentzon I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous and beginning to shake about sailing the tiny wobbly optimist boats at camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp but I soon learnt that the worst thing that could happen was that I would get a free swim!!

I was nervous about sailing on camp because I thought I was going to tip over

After looking up at the terrifying wall we went abseiling.

We went to the abseiling course

Kawau Ksland

Next week the year six'es are going to camp at Kawau island and I would like to go fishing because I go fishing at Waheki island.